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Wednesday, July 29, 2020

Writing Task - Week 1

Welcome, to day I am going to be sharing with you today my writing for week 1. Here is my working.
Powerful adjectives for a tree

Sinister 
Eerie
Cruel
Menacing 
Foreboding
Threatening 
Cold blooded
Wicked

Writing 3 sentences using the things below

Describing what the trees are and how you use my senses to describe what I see, hear taste and smell around me.
The tree branches were like gnarled fingers of the Wizened old man.


Sweet Marshmallow smells sauntered through the forest.
The sweet flower smell flows with the breeze.
A strong aroma floated passed my nose

Drifted 
Wafted 
Floated 
Raced 
Danced
Waiting 
Haltered 
Froze
Linger
Pause
Loitered
Silently
Curiously

Vocabulary bank:
Sugar Coated 
Sugar Filled 
House
Shadowy 
Door encrusted with … Sweets
Rickety Roof
Tall chimney

Suddenly in the clearing they spotted a house. A house with a rickety roof, a tall chimney, shadowy windows and a door encrusted with… sweets!
They knew they shouldn’t touch the house, but candied caramels tempted them.
They knew they mustn't  lick the house, but the crunchy honeycomb lures them closer.
They knew there might be consequences; the smells were intoxicating to there innocent souls.

Taste and texture words: 
Rich
Sour
Sweet
Salty
Crunchy
Chewy
Tasty
Divine 
Edible 


Create Task:
9 Sentences about the woods with Hansel and Gretel using all the fancy words up on the doc.
Have to make them specific.

I’m frightened, we should go home,” It will be fine,”
Replied Hansel even tho he knew deep down their mother wanted them to disappear 

Here was my working and my notes from my workshop and for my working. That's all. Goodbye.

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