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Tuesday, June 16, 2020
Writing Week 9
Hi today I am going to bed sharing with you my writing create task for this week and explaining the goal on what I had to work on. My goal for this week was "Show Don't Tell" and we had to take ordinary sentences and create them into something new. To explain it a bit more you pretty much take the sentence and add to it giving it more detail and painting a picture inside the readers head. I had to do that with 5 sentences. Here is what I made. 
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Hey Makayla, I think that you have done a wonderful job on using show don't tell, I like how you have placed your blog but there are some miner issues like maybe add a question at the end and put the goal right at the top, like where you first start writing, Thanks - Lexus.
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