Hi today I am going to be sharing with you my Writing work for this week. My goal for this week was "Goal: Level 4 - Support ideas with precise detail that elaborates on the main points" I had to take little bits of my narrative and taking little by little and going deeper into the moment we could not add to the story but just add more detail to it. We had to show this in a google slides and and to highlight the before sentences and the after to compare what one was better. Here is my finished task for this week feel free to go through my slideshow.
I am going to be using these in my narrative and hopefully going to be adding more detail throughout my narrative. On the last slide I have a list on what things can help me and you with editing and writing a piece of work. When taking the sentences I really thought hard about how I could change it. That's all for today. Goodbye.
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