Narritive

Today I will be sharing with you my Narrative. A few post back I sent a blog post about a planner about my story and I will now share with you my final product. The story is not the exact same as my planner but it is similar enjoy.

Hi My name is Liv and this is my story of how I saved the world. It all started in my small town my dad had a lab under our house it was just me, my mum and my dad and my big brother. We lived a happy life I spent my time playing during the day while my mum cleaned the home and my brother Seth went to school. While this is happening, my dad was in a lab under our house working on something. Day and night he worked hard. I visited him all the time saw what he was working on I was too young to know what he was working on but I knew this was gonna be worth it.

Many Months past and my Dad had finally came out of his lab and was screaming and shouting with excitement “It’s done, I did it we are going to be rich” We all stopped what we were doing and huddled around my father as he presented us with a man but not any man but a robot man. My dad had created the first man maid to do your bidding, to do your work and they can work for all sorts of companies. We were all so excited. It was no surprise that news got out. People started bidding on the robot and the one that offered the most amount of money would get the robot. This started my dad carer he was a scientist and not only that but a famous scientist. With all this drama happening we were becoming richer and richer by the minute. We bought a house on the wealthiest street and bought a 3 story house with a pool and a playground in the backyard. We were all so excited but not Seth. Seth however had a different story. Seth had found out that his friends were fake an only wanted to hang out with him because he was now rich.

Day by day we were the face of every magazine and poster in the world everyone knew about us. But day by day my brother Seth grew sad and lonely and depressed. He wished that all his fake friends would disappear. Me on the other hand was having the time of my life I wasn’t a spoiled child I mostly asked to send money to charity. Our business grew bigger and bigger and bigger until each and every business had a robot to work for them. People were not very happy with this because many people were losing there jobs. But we convinced the bank to give people the money to spend the rest of there life with. Robots were now everywhere in malls in cafes and even delivering your mail. But one fateful night my Seth went downstairs broke my dad's secret safe with all  the numbers and hacks to control any computer. He took the file and ran away. The next morning we woke up and were all devastated. On the news they said that robots were going mad and they said it was a malfunction.

 This was no ordinary malfunction This malfunction changed the world and it was all from one person… Seth my brother. He controls them with a secret file that he keeps with him at all times. He is nowhere to be seen but he has control. He soon found out that he was a hacker and he hacked to robots genetic and he is able to make them do his bidding. We all hated Seth he had broken us all and he even regretted it.

10 years Later…
It has been 5 years of living pain we had lived a lonely life our father was taken away to war to try and fix what my brother had caused. I am now 18 living with my mother on a tiny island which used to be New Zealand but with Global warming rising and water is slowly rising with melting ice capsules the world is in trouble and only one thing can save it. The day was here on what we all most regret even my brother. He did not know where are location was so that's the way he sent an army of robots to our town and they took everyone, my mother and I tried to run but they were too fast I was able to escape but my mother wasn’t able to. She died that day and I knew my brother regret it because in each robot there is a camera so what they see he saw. I could see him through the face of the robot and him bursting into tears. I held mum close to me and beat up the robot. I told the robot to send my brother a message he put him on call and I said. “Seth if you are watching this look, look at what you did and don’t think I am going to let this go better watch your back”. I ended the message blood dripping down my arms from my mum. After that day I was sad more than sad I was angry and I knew I was going to destroy not only the robots but Seth and I wasn’t going to go soft.

After a few years of thinking on how to stop my brother and his wicked plans I decided to go to war. I had not seen my dad in almost 10 years from all the attacks. I trained and trained and trained for years and I was finally accepted in. I hopped on the boat and set sail the boat was the only safe way out. I went and sat down next to a Girl she looked my age and I went to introduce myself. “ Hey come sit with me I’m Liv what's your name” She slowly walked over and sat down next to her and one by one we introduced ourselves “Hi my name is Liv what’s your guys name” she turned to me with a look of interest I asked her what were all those badges from to start a conformation. She replied “Oh these I got them from my dad he died during the war from the robots and that malfunction I look up to him”

I saw a sudden tear roll down her eyes I went closer in comfort her and said “ It will be ok we will win this war and everything will be the way it use to be” She wiped the tears away and looked at me and said “ Thank you” We smiled at each other and talked the whole way there. When we were almost there she asked “ Don’t mind me asking but why do you want to go to war” I look at her, hoping that I could avoid it if she knew the truth would she want to be my friend I thought I might as well be honest. “ My brother is Seth and he killed my mother so I am wanting to win the war and end his misery”.

As we waited on the boat we talked away and thought of what the war would look like we were scared but excited at the same time. A chance to give service and respect to our world and be able to fight for justice and what is right who wouldn’t oh I know my so called brother that’s who. For the extra hour I kept thinking of what he was doing. Was he planning his evil attack was he grieving for mum from what he had caused. In that hour of thinking I didn’t feel sad but I felt angry, angry for revenge I wanted him to pay for what he had done. Well entering our destination we got a good look around the outside of the perimeter and saw all the buildings the field where they work and lots lots more. We exited the the boat and grabbed our luggage and headed to the main hall. There we were given our new clothes and were shown to our new rooms. As we looked around we all of a sudden “ ALL OF YOU GET IN A LINE NOW!” we all turned and rushed into a line “ Stand up straight NOW!” we all strut ourselves up straight and one by one the general manager walked up to each one of us as yield “ What is your name?”

All shocked by what just happen but as always we all answered. One by one we told our names and when it came to Beth’s turn she said “ My name is Beth Opal” a small smile woke upon both “ Hello Uncle how are you” They leaped into each others arms for a warm hello. After that moment  they let each other go he slowly walked up to me and asked “ What is your name my dear?” I answered “ Olivia Nelson but people call me Liv”  He paused in shock and in silents but then asked “ Is your brother -” I interrupted “ Seth?”. He nodded in interest, I sadly nodded back and there was silence in the room.

I felt as saying these words would make my visit here very hard nobody would want to hang out with the sister of the enemy. From that day on, no one wanted to hang out with me or sit with me. I felt alone and sad. But at least I had Beth. Beth didn’t seem to care if my brother was Seth because she knew I was nothing like him.

Weeks went by we trained all day everyday 6am - 3pm each day it was hard. We learnt how to survive if we had to seperate. We learnt to hunt for food and water. We also learnt how to fight witch was my favorite thing. It was like a boxing ring they put two people in the ring and the ref yield “ FIGHT” I bet almost everyone but I sometimes wondered why we needed to learn to fight. We had guns and tanks and weapons but we never used them. So one day I asked Beth and she said “ Oh don’t you know the robots are bulletproof so the guns are no use”.

Days turned into weeks, weeks turned into months, and months turned into years and finally I got accepted I was going to war. Beth was coming to we were so excited we hopped on a secret train hidden in a great big bush or was it. I stood up close and my stomach felt like it was going to explode but I still had hope in myself that we would make it. Entering the train we got escorted to our cabin and I was grateful that my roommate was Beth we had been friends from the beginning and will always be.

We woke up the next morning and were about to head out to breakfast until we heard a scream a cry for help we rush to the scene and to our shock there lay a dead body. Her name was Layla Red I knew her from when we were training together I fought her once and won. We stared at the body for some time and called for help. When help came I had already investigated the crime scene and found an awful discovery. She had been stabbed. Thankfully a detective was on the train and he questioned everybody. I gave my information that Beth and I were in our cabin and when we heard the scream we rush out and found her here.

We were set free to go to breakfast. At breakfast we were served eggs on toast with bacon on the side and mini pancakes as well. I didn’t touch my food I didn’t feel hungry I stared out the window and thought someone on this train is a murderer and they might come for me next.

After I ate breakfast Beth and I entered our Cabin but before I entered Beth stopped and gave a terrifying scream. I pushed past her and on the wall next to my bed said “ Better watch your back” in bright red blood. I was terrified it felt like my stomach had left my body and my heart froze. I was escorted out to the detectives room where I got asked a few questions I answered honestly and said “ I want everyone to sleep in the lounge where I can see then and they can see me” The guard answered, “ As you wish.''

When came night time I didn’t get to sleep no one did they all looked at each other, thinking that they were the murderer or who was. Days went by and I when we finally arrived I looked out the window and realized it was a trap… But how the leader Beth's Uncle lead this train the only person the wasn’t questioned was Beth but she didn’t plan it did she I don’t know. So many things were going through my head until. Blackout. I somehow woke up in the middle of nowhere not in a dessert not on the battlefield but on a deserted island. I woke up tied to a chair a cloth over my month and no memory on witch had happened from the past 2 maybe 3 hours I don’t know.

I grabbed the knife from my shoe and cut the rope for my hands to be free. I grabbed the cloth and before I threw it, it had a message on it said “We see you” I quiver in fear when reading this message. Someone is watching me was it Beth? Was it my brother Seth? Was it a robot?. I looked around trying to figure out where I was. But I couldn’t see anything. It was too dark I lay on the sand and looked up into the dazzling night sky and the twinkling star sparkle above me I think to myself what happened to this world. From walking from home to school. Then drive home from school. Then when there is no school because people believe that why have an education to get a job when all we need is robots. When people sent out this news most people were furiosus but the people that had upper jobs or were owners of a company took it on board.

My eyes slowly started to close and I slowly drifted away. When I woke up a loud Bang happened I looked around where I was and I soon realized I was on the battlefield in the middle of the war one side of angry soldiers but on the other were terrifying robots and above them all was my brother Seth. Seth lead his army out to war and the soldiers. I jumped to my feet and ran I didn’t know where I was running but I didn’t care I was in the middle of a death trap and no way out as I ran Soldiers were running and charging towards the robots lead by Beth’s Uncle. I felt that all my emotions were coming out fear, anger, sadness and disgust. My stomach felt like it had butterflies in it and feeling like throwing up. I continued to run as fast as I could with a awful straight behind me I keep my head up high and kept running.

I had been running a couple minutes until I came to a secret hole in the ground which leads to an underground tunnel. I said to myself, “This must be where the soldiers hide all there files” I followed the tunnels way and came to a horrifying scene. A jail cell was built underground I heard noises. I slowly walked towards the cells until… “HELP MME” something grabbed my hand and pulled my head back into the cell door. The hand felt cold hard and felt like… Metal. I quickly grabbed the robots hand and pulled his head in the cell door he was knocked out. I quickly moved away but then I stopped I heard a small voice calling my name saying “Liv Liv I miss you liv”. I turned around and only to see a man he was a middle age man long hair a beard and smelled like he hadn’t showered in forever. I quietly asked “Excuse me sir who are you” The man slowly looked up at me and I only saw a smile he quickly responded “Liv is that you” I was stunned for a moment and second of confusion 
But then realized I had found my dad.

I yelled at my dad “Watch out” I banged against the cells and broke them down in one blow. I ran into my father's arms “My how you’ve grown” he said “And how strong you got” I smiled at him but the moment had to end I lifted him up and said “ Why are you here don’t they know there’s a war above you why are you here” His smile went to a frown and like a shadow of sadness and darkness and come over us both he said to me in a quiet voice “ Where's your mother Liv is she OK”. Speechless with no answer and put my head down and with tears in my eyes and a stutter in saying these words I said to him “ She’s dead Seth killed her when he sent his army to our town, I joined the army in anger and trying to take revenge for mum” Tears of sadness filled our eyes as we said no more for he knew that his own son had killed the love of his life.

I gave him a hug and said to him “We have to get out of here” He nodded in agreement we slowly headed towards the exit. As we walked towards the light we could hear screams of pain coming from all directions I heard cries for help. We rushed out of the tunnel and I called a helicopter to come and get us. My dad asked “Where did you get that watch and this helicopter” I replied “ Before we left I snuck into the office and there was a cyber attack on the computers so I stole a watch to come in handy” I escorted him in the helicopter and it set off “ It drives itself”he said with a huge smile on his face I replied in a tone of voice “ Of course Technology these days the future is different” I waved goodbye and he disappeared in the distance. I turned around but suddenly quick and quit blackout. I saw nothing.

I woke up once again tied to a chair but my surroundings were different it looked like a lab. There were a lot of computers. I was in a room tied to a chair I was blank on what was going on. Next thing you know a general of some sort don’t know his name never asked but he walked in and said to me. “Hello Oliva welcome to area 52” I thought in my head, “Area 52 what about 51 I don’t know” I smiled back and asked nicely “ Why am I tied to a chair sir” he made a small laugh in reply. “ You put up quit the fight Miss Liv” I knew what had happened they drugged me I was in a place where I didn’t know about I mean what do you expect it’s like taking a baby from it’s mother a whole new environment.

They set me free and I was free to roam around they gave some spare clothes a grey top with little buttons at the top with a collar and some camo pants with a little buckle on it. I split my hair in a high ponytail and walked around to see where I really was. I came down a long corridor which lead to a door slightly open I looked in and saw a horrifying scene they had my brother. As much as I hated him he was still my brother. He was trapped to a metal chairs. I watch quietly but all of a sudden the computers went off and a cyber attack happened vises had blocked access to everything and they were now unable to see my brother. I heard a loud bang through the hallway and I rushed to the scene my brother had just ended the life of Beth’s Uncle he had a smile as he stared at me. Walking towards me with a dripping bloody knife he said to me “Oh why hello there Liv oh how I missed you” I quickly pushed him to a wall and shouted “What happened why'd you do it” He said with a smirk “Because who doesn’t want to rule the world, who doesn’t want to win wars” I stopped him I felt like I could kill him but all of a sudden “STOP!” I turned to see Beth. I let him go but she ran into his arms. I said to her, “What are you doing Beth he's a killer the reason your dad died” She laughed and she replied “Oh poor poor Oliva what a perfect life and perfect family and perfect friends don’t you get it I wanted your life but no” Shocked by these words she took the knife and stabbed my brother.

When this happened a piece of my disappears, my best friend had killed my brother. As she looked down at the body lying there I drifted to the floor in sadness and tears rolled down my eyes. She explained what had happened “Olivia when your brother stole the files I found him in the alleyway and he thought we fell “In Love” He wishes and so I took his idea on board and we side by side worked together I went undercover while he worked with the robots. But since I have the files I don’t need him” I yelled at her “ So all this time all the killing was you ``''Yes” She grinned. With no hesitation, I grabbed the knife and stabbed her I hated her she was the one that killed my mum my brother and my life. She screamed in pain but I didn’t stop. She somehow survived and tried to fight me. With one quick blow she was out. That relieve cam across I took the files and worked on the robots and fixed everything.

Everything was back to the way it was. I was announced a hero and was reunited with my dad. We had now promised to never leave each other. After all this drama I decided to become a teacher to teach others how to do self defense in case they are ever in danger. But with my dad the future was gonna be big he invented flying cars, Floating chairs, apple watch projector and many more. Global warming stopped and people stopped using plastics. I love the future and I soon settled down and had kids and they always want to hear this story and each night I would share it with them. I put them to bed and I lay in bed and I dream that my brother is there calling me saying something to me from the heavens above into my dreams saying “I’m Sorry” I slowly whisper to myself “I forgive you” and this is how my story ends.

I hope you enjoyed reading it and tell me any feed back to make it better. Bye!!